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The link you posted leads me to "Gfantis vs Guest Monster Book 1".

The price is right: free!

The extended introduction explaining the history of such legendary monsters starts long before Godzilla movies is great stuff.

I don't see a story titled "The Visitor", but I do see a story called "The Intruder", which has your name :)

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I see a few editing errors, but the writing is great at creating visual images without being repetitive... very hard to do. Being a very short story helped me a lot. I don't spend a lot of time reading fiction as I much prefer studying history and technology with my limited free time. But this was a fun read and felt faithful to the traditional movie genre.

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Yeah sorry about the brainfart. I was excited. Glad you enjoyed it. Yeah I'm a visual person and it shows in my writing. A lot is from watching movies and anime.

 

Falcon

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