FalconC45 162 Posted January 12, 2017 Hey guys, The EBOOK my story is in is OUT! I'm lil nervous but EXCITED! Here's the link: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/694952 ENJOY! PS. My story is titled "The Visitor" 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
+streakeagle 871 Posted January 12, 2017 The link you posted leads me to "Gfantis vs Guest Monster Book 1". The price is right: free! The extended introduction explaining the history of such legendary monsters starts long before Godzilla movies is great stuff. I don't see a story titled "The Visitor", but I do see a story called "The Intruder", which has your name :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
+streakeagle 871 Posted January 12, 2017 I see a few editing errors, but the writing is great at creating visual images without being repetitive... very hard to do. Being a very short story helped me a lot. I don't spend a lot of time reading fiction as I much prefer studying history and technology with my limited free time. But this was a fun read and felt faithful to the traditional movie genre. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FalconC45 162 Posted January 12, 2017 Yeah sorry about the brainfart. I was excited. Glad you enjoyed it. Yeah I'm a visual person and it shows in my writing. A lot is from watching movies and anime. Falcon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
