OT: New drawing

[02RAF_Puff]

Hi folks..been busy working on this one for my friend. His Dad flew 30 plus missions as a rear gunner in Lancasters of 97 Sqn, anyways he wanted a drawing to hang on his wall and this is how its turned out so far...all critiques welcome please.

 

 

PS..its a piss poor photo but once completed, I'll get a sharper image, but you can get the idea.

[Rickitycrate]

Very nice drawing. It does seem to feature the rear gunner position so that is very apprpriate for your friend. I am not a critic but I can say I think it's fab.

[Duce Lewis]

Fab indeed!

The Lanc is outstanding with nice lighting effects

Only trouble I had was detemining it's height

The foreground grass is rather featureless

Maybe a litle irregular tufts or wheel marks from undershoots at the end of the strip

I really hate doing this as I can't do much more than stick figures

 

Great job and a really nice gesture Puff!

[+RAF_Louvert]

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Beautiful art work Puff. Very, very well done.

 

[02RAF_Puff]

Thank you for the comments, I deleted the first image due to reworking the grass, thanks you for picking that up Duce... { I tried to edit the post but couldn't find how lol }

 

[itifonhom]

Fantastic artwork! Really love it, nice perspective, good light effects and a masterful technique, great drawing indeed!

 

itifonhom

[JohnGresham]

Looks good. I'd be tempted to extend the image and add more grass at the bottom, so you can include her shadow as she comes into land.

[77Scout]

Wow, very good work. I wish I had a tenth of that kind of artistic talent.

[Bullethead]

Bloody Hell! I'd like to see more stuff like this. Do you have an online gallery?

[02RAF_Puff]

Thanks folks, I was thinking of extending the grass, but my friend is very happy with it so I thought better than to mess with it lol.

 

'A Safe Return' Lancaster R for Robert of 97 Sqn on finals.