02RAF_Puff 0 Posted September 27, 2009 Hi folks..been busy working on this one for my friend. His Dad flew 30 plus missions as a rear gunner in Lancasters of 97 Sqn, anyways he wanted a drawing to hang on his wall and this is how its turned out so far...all critiques welcome please. PS..its a piss poor photo but once completed, I'll get a sharper image, but you can get the idea. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rickitycrate 10 Posted September 27, 2009 Very nice drawing. It does seem to feature the rear gunner position so that is very apprpriate for your friend. I am not a critic but I can say I think it's fab. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Duce Lewis 3 Posted September 27, 2009 Fab indeed! The Lanc is outstanding with nice lighting effects Only trouble I had was detemining it's height The foreground grass is rather featureless Maybe a litle irregular tufts or wheel marks from undershoots at the end of the strip I really hate doing this as I can't do much more than stick figures Great job and a really nice gesture Puff! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RAF_Louvert 101 Posted September 27, 2009 . Beautiful art work Puff. Very, very well done. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
02RAF_Puff 0 Posted September 28, 2009 Thank you for the comments, I deleted the first image due to reworking the grass, thanks you for picking that up Duce... { I tried to edit the post but couldn't find how lol } Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
itifonhom 6 Posted September 28, 2009 Fantastic artwork! Really love it, nice perspective, good light effects and a masterful technique, great drawing indeed! itifonhom Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JohnGresham 0 Posted September 28, 2009 Looks good. I'd be tempted to extend the image and add more grass at the bottom, so you can include her shadow as she comes into land. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
77Scout 3 Posted September 28, 2009 Wow, very good work. I wish I had a tenth of that kind of artistic talent. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bullethead 12 Posted September 28, 2009 Bloody Hell! I'd like to see more stuff like this. Do you have an online gallery? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
02RAF_Puff 0 Posted September 29, 2009 Thanks folks, I was thinking of extending the grass, but my friend is very happy with it so I thought better than to mess with it lol. 'A Safe Return' Lancaster R for Robert of 97 Sqn on finals. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
