I want your brutal opinion ... seriously.

[Skyviper]

As most of you know I got interested in helping out a local charity. They're coming out with a program and I remade one of their videos for them. They seemed to like it but I'm wondering what I could have done differently. I'm using the free version of Lightworks as I'm too broke to buy the full version .. for now. What did I do right/wrong what needs work .. what doesn't etc. Thank you in advance for your time and review.

 

[+JediMaster]

Frankly, I thought the video was just fine. While you could change it, I don't know that you could necessarily improve it.

 

That said, the music wasn't really to my taste, but I think that's highly subjective and you should go with what they like.

[Heck]

I very much like the way you did this, Skyviper. The music seems generic for this type of video, but I like the way your video moves, and the presentation of the message was very well done. On the whole, it has exactly the effect you intended. Well done.